this is nice, i like how you did your hair and your necklace!
I like the way that you did all the outlines, it makes it look very identifiable, it looks like your now going back in with some more text?
the outlining is very good but u need to fill in some more text
ui like what u started doing to ur hair at the top i think u should do that the whole way down and id ut more shadow work in ur face
I think that you need to fill with text along with the outline. also i think if you used different fonts when you do it would look really cool
very good but fill in hair
I agree with lacrosseboy. do the hair thing the whole way down and it'd look really cool
great start
your hair is really cool
this is nice, i like how you did your hair and your necklace!
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you did all the outlines, it makes it look very identifiable, it looks like your now going back in with some more text?
ReplyDeletethe outlining is very good but u need to fill in some more text
ReplyDeleteui like what u started doing to ur hair at the top i think u should do that the whole way down and id ut more shadow work in ur face
ReplyDeleteI think that you need to fill with text along with the outline. also i think if you used different fonts when you do it would look really cool
ReplyDeletevery good but fill in hair
ReplyDeleteI agree with lacrosseboy. do the hair thing the whole way down and it'd look really cool
ReplyDeletegreat start
ReplyDeleteyour hair is really cool
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